June 4

In the flash of the lightning I saw…

My dad loves going to the beach house in winter so where heading down for a relaxing weekend. The first thing my dad does is light up the fire place, the house is worm in no time.

We decided to take a walk down to the beach, it’s really cold. As where walking the sky starts to get very dark and all of a sudden in the flash of lightning I saw the most magnificent light show. The lightning looked like it was bouncing off the water, within seconds the thunder and rain came. I’m screaming and running all the way home. I HATE THUNDER!!!

Posted June 4, 2017 by thomasb2014 in category Uncategorized

2 thoughts on “

  1. libby2016

    Great writing Thomas. I love the way you have set the scene – you really invite the reader in to join you. Don’t forget to edit your work and get someone else to check it with you before you post your work.


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